After taking some of the advice on board from comments and also fixing some of the major grammatical errors that I had in the earlier chapters, I've heavily edited the entire novel up until this point. I've also made some changes in regard to the plot and personality of the characters. I'm making this 'chapter' so I can explain all of the edits in a concise way so it's not too surprising when there are some differences in the future.
By the way, I'll be writing this book in 'volumes' since that's how all my favourite light novels are written :)
This volume should conclude around chapter 60 or so—at the end of the Cloaks Arc. In case you were wondering, the next arc will likely be the Killer Winter Arc, where everyone has to survive through a harsh winter (like a super difficult winter). I've also been thinking far into the future and I'd like to create some arcs for a few of the top-ranking individuals on the leaderboard like Ollie, Noah and Mackenzie. I'd also like to have a real arc for Chloe (This one will be a good one). Aside from those, I'd like to have an arc maybe with the Elven race, although some of these arcs can be moulded together.
I'm hoping to get an audiobook of this novel and also a pdf/kindle copy once I finish the first volume. (Now that I think about it, I haven't even thought about what the name of this volume will be~)
My Patreon supporters are going to be crucial for this <3
Also, Volume 0 is in development!
Anyways, here are the edits.
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Chapter 1:
Chapter 2:
Chapter 3:
Chapter 4:
Chapter 5:
Chapter 6:
Chapter 7:
Chapter 8:
Chapter 9:
Chapter 10:
Chapter 11:
Chapter 12:
Chapter 13:
Chapter 14:
Chapter 15:
Chapter 16 (This was a painful one):
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Honestly, just reread the chapter; there are some pretty big changes.
Chapter 17:
Chapter 18:
Chapter 19:
Chapter 20:
Chapter 21:
Chapter 22:
Chapter 23:
Chapter 24:
Chapter 25:
Chapter 26:
Chapter 27:
Chapter 28:
Chapter 29:
Chapter 30-32:
Chapter 33:
Chapter 34:
Chapter 35:
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Anyways if you've read to the end then good job I guess.
I'm likely going to edit the novel a few more times in the future since I still might have missed some stuff (It's literally like 2 am here and I'm dying of tiredness, I just had some exams in the past few days as well.)
Well, I'll be waiting for you in the next chapter.